Saturday, May 24, 2008

Chapter #1 - Broken wings

Chapter 1, Broken wings.

Sky wonder palace. A fierce battle is taken in the skies, as the battle between good and evil begins with celestial and demonic attacks are held. All of a sudden an angel is seen fighting and evading attacks with enormous speed jumping from rooftop to rooftop all around the palace.



All of a sudden the angel reaches the throne room of the palace and sees one more angel agaisnt a simple human with a dark robe covering most of his face, however, extreme perfection could be seen in the uncovered parts of his face.

"Let the eternity of darkness and chaos rule this universe" said the man in the robe.

"I cannot believe its you Apozen... You betrayed us..." said the angel that was already in the room.



"I am the fallen angel prophecies spoke of always, I already assasinated your pathetic god, now either you are in my legion or you are out" said Apozen.

"Even though my leader is dead, I shall cast judgement upon you!" said the angel.

The angel put his sword up in the air and it started glowing.

"Do not bring me your misedicordious nonsense, if that is your choice, then let it be, HELL GUARDIANS!" Said Apozen

All of a sudden a large ammount of monsters like skulls with fire surrounding them attempt to attack the angel, but instantly they are stricken by light arrows of the other angel.

"Ret be careful" said the angel.

"Laoni..." said Ret looking at her.

All of a sudden Apozen begins to load power and the tiles of the Sky Wonder Palace begin to shatter, the structure begins to tremble as Rettan and Laoni begin to get terrified with such power, as Apozen laughs insanely. Laoni and Rettan look at each other and they agree to attack, even if they have to sacrifice their lives. The duo just close their eyes and dive with all their power agaisnt Apozen creating a gigantic explosion, that could be seen as a supernova from the world below. Rettan and Laoni fly into different directions from the explosion of the Sky wonder palace as Apozen screams, getting his perfect skin burned, but insanely laughing at the fall of the celestial kingdom...

-*-*JETS INTO FREEDOM*-*-The legend of the war for peace

"Its about time you wake up kid" said an old man.

"Huh?! Who are you?!" said Rettan waking up quickly.

"My name is Serf" said the old man.



"Where is Laoni?! What happened with Apozen?!" said Rettan jumping out of the bed.

"So that is how you treat someone that healed your wounds and has taken care of you during your sleep that lasted 2 weeks?" said Serf laughing.

"I... I'm sorry" said Rettan calming down.

"Now, tell me your name youngster" said Serf offering some water.

"My name is Rettan, where am I?" said Rettan

"You have been mumbling the name Laoni and something about the glory of Vult in your sleep, you sound as if you think you are the grand seraphym Rettan, you must have hit your head hard, you are just a simple human." said Serf.

"I AM THE GRAND SERAPHYM YOU HUMAN!" screamed Rettan to old Serf.

"Yes sure, whatever you say oh omnipotent lord" said Serf sarcastically.

"Don´t make me judge you! grrrr Judgement!!!!..." Rettan put his hand in front of Serf's face.

"You done yet?" said Serf.

"W... Why isn't it working?" said Rettan looking at his hand.

"Like I said, you are a simple human being I found with Gullio while looking for mushrooms near Gnome forest the night the great explosion from the sky happened." said Serf.

"So it did happen... Alright gramps where am I? I gotta hurry and find Laoni" Said Rettan, adjusting his boots.

"This is the farm lands, this here place is the Goat farm, south east of Centaur village." said Serf.

"Well I thank you for saving me and all but I gotta get going." said Rettan.
"If I were you I wouldnt go out without a weapon, since the supernova, many monsters started apearing" said Serf.

"So... What am I supposed to do?" said Rettan.

"Stay here for a while maybe..." said Serf.

"But Laoni... where could she be?" said Rettan.

All of a sudden an older man walks into the room, stares at Rettan, and smiles.

"Where ever she is... Im sure she is fine." said the old man.

"This is my brother Gullio." said Serf.

Gullio stared at Rettan, and walked back outside. Rettan asked himself why did he have such strange attitude, then all of a sudden he saw in his hand a dagger.

"O.o how did this get here?!" said Rettan.

"Oh that Gullio, he loves to freak people out with his magic" said Serf laughing.

Rettan was shocked

"Well now you can go out to search for the girl" said Serf.

Rettan smiled and started to walk out of the house to thank Gullio, but all of a sudden a black thunder striked outside, and two creatures named Twindemons were floating in front of Gullio. Rettan rushed to attack the Twindemons but is interrupted by a shadowball attack. It was Apozen, with a mask covering his burned face, that had suddenly teleported there. Suddenly Apozen attacks Rettan with that shadowball again and slams him to the floor leaving him nearly defeated in the floor.

"I finally found you Grand Seraphym, now I shall destroy you just like I did to all the angels, and to your wife Laoni" said Apozen aproaching to Rettan.

"You killed..." said Rettan hardly speaking.

Quickly Gullio stands in front of Apozen, covering him from Rettan and opening his arms.

"Youngster! Don´t believe what he says! He just wants to discourage you! Believe in you, If you believe she is fine then she is!" said Gullio.

"You better get out of my way inferior being, I am your new god" said Apozen laughing.

"Get away from here and search for Laoni!" said Gullio.

Rettan was just shocked, as he began to see Gullio shining in front of Apozen, it was the first time he saw a human being protecting him... Gullio charges his power and makes a huge flash, the flash destroyed the Twindemons, and made Apozen and himself disapear. After the flash Rettan fainted.



A few hours later... Rettan wakes up in the ruins of what once was Gullio and Serf´s house, with no sign of Gullio or Serf... Rettan releases a tear for the two humans that helped him by sacrificing their lives. He ends up building a small grave for the two of them.

"They are gone... Just because they were protecting me... because they believed in me... I guess I won't let them down, Ill find Laoni and avenge their death by defeating Apozen... but I'm just a mere human now... what to do... Well top priority is to find Laoni... but where do I start...?"

Suddenly Rettan remembers Serf's words saying that Centaur Village was north west of the farm lands, as Rettan left in the sunrise, he looked back to see how a farm of two brothers, was now just ruins and fire...



He built up courage, and began to walk, to search for the home of the centaurs...

9 comments:

dlonthegreat said...

AWSOME

but try and use other word besides all of a sudden

other than that verry verry good

Kunam said...

XD

Gabriel Gonzalez said...

Awesome, 5/5 already :)





-GabrielGonza

PCessna said...

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Arlene said...

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